Kale, I think you shoould pay their eyes more attention. When eyes are covered with anything character looks not expressive enough. And it was you who said that Kamo's must have expressive eyes.
This one is too large to upload on spore.com and it's screenshot is too large to post it here, so here's the link:
The third part of my adventure series. I can't wait until someone fixes two other parts so I can translate and share them. This one is almost finished.