Name: Jack

Pokemon: Sneasel

Appearance: Tall,but skinny with long, dirty blonde hair, one light blue eye, and one dark blue eye. Slightly tan, bruised skin. Has several scars on his cheek. He wears scale mail shirt and pants,piloswine leather snow boots, and a piloswine rawhide jacket.

Pokemon Appearance: Shiny (pink with yellow feather and blue crystal), the right claw's foreclaw is broken, and the crystal is cracked.

Personality: Protective and adventurous but, shy and reckless.

Bio: His parents are unknown but, they died the day he was born. He was born on a iceberg which landed on your shore 3 years ago but he just made an appearance. While on the iceberg he almost got eaten by Kyrem but his Sneasel,Blade,K.O'd Kyrem after Kyrem cracked his crystal, and Kyrem never attacked them sense. He is 18 years
old and his fishing skills are very developed because, everyday on the iceberg he and Blade had to fish with their hands.His daily schedule was: Wake up ,fish ,cook fish ,eat ,expand shelter ,fish ,cook ,eat ,hunt ,sow ,cook ,eat. His favorites are listed here: Color :Black ,Food :Magikarp, Pokemon :Magikarp, Clothes :Magikarp scale mail.

Current Occupation: Fisherman

P.S. I'm not sure foreclaw a.k.a forefinger is a word and I might of not put the right "sense".

Sorry about the double posting. Is it better now?

Yeah, but I should probably PM DB. Really, just one final touch is that you need to space between the words.

You can tell I like magikarp...

Yeah, so do I. I used to level them up to 100 and totally surprise people with them. I once beat rayquaza with one (Via wireless battle)

I taught my Arceus fly and surf.

Yeah, no legendaries here unless there's a LOT of people here and a vote. But yeah, I should fetch DB real quick.

OK

Okay, now we just wait for her to answer the PM. Hopefully she'll respond soon.

I have to go... I'll check up tomorrow.

Okay, then...

Wait, in your sheet you say Kyrem, do you mean Kyurem?

Db your timing is Beautiful!

*Bows* Or wait was that sarcasm?

no. Like the second he says bye your like 'Oh Hie der!"