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Takua01


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It's my first series! But I don't want to go any further until I know it's a winner...
If you don't like it, please tell me what I can do to improve it.
It's a mystery / action series.

Episode 1
Episode 2

More to come!

It helps to play with the volume up. I put a lot of little details in the visuals and sounds.

No C&C or Bot Parts!

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Takua01


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Please try it somebody. I need feedback.

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Couldar


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Link doesn't seem to be working. Or at least for me I just get a greyed out sporepedia screen.

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crazyjoe98


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http://forum.spore.com/jforum/posts/list/72864.page

Takua01


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Let me update that link.
*EDIT*
Link Updated

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Couldar


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OK, not bad.
Looks good, sound is very nice.
Only probs I had with it really were camera issues, getting the second key is kind of a pain when the camera is stuck in the rocks...
The overall feel of it was good, left me wanting the rest of the story.

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Takua01


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Couldar wrote:OK, not bad.
Looks good, sound is very nice.
Only probs I had with it really were camera issues, getting the second key is kind of a pain when the camera is stuck in the rocks...
The overall feel of it was good, left me wanting the rest of the story.

I was considering making more of it, but it didn't get enough responses when it first came out. If you want more, I suppose I could attempt to continue it.

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dumblydum


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I'll play this series. It looks quite nice.

Takua01


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In that case,I shall begin work on the next episode right now!

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Takua01


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Early Shots of Episode 2:

The tunnel...



Outside view of the world. You won't see the outside when playing, I just wanted to show you how big of a level this is.

This is the entrance to the palace. The trick is getting to it...

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Takua01


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Episode 2 is out!
I worked all week on this, please like it!

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