Here are a few of my favorites that I spent a lot of time on. Every mission I make I spend a lot of time play testing, spell checking, trying to make the worlds detailed and immersive, and even have some of my friends try it out before I publish it. I hope you enjoy playing them as much as I did making them.

Trouble at Crucible Station

One of my first. I spent a lot of time on the scenery.


Pirates of Mos Eos

Space pirate mission. Some combat, but mostly investigating.


Damsel in Distress

A fractured fairy tale. It is mostly story, so I think you will enjoy it since you've made it seem like that is your thing.


I might have some others I will throw at you later if you like these. I don't want to over load you!

How about a little 300? http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=ftr-adventure%3Ausr-Vilageidiotx|500192700949%3Asast-500449805193%3Aview-newest

No one else, come on, I'll be nice

Sure. This adventure might be too combat oriented for your tastes:
Rescue on Opal
but I could use a good honest review.

This is my first adventure. See what you think. It's occasionally buggy, but not too often. I'm planning to polish it up and re release it, but that is on my 'someday' list. Any recommendations would be greatly appreciated.
Infection

Everything else I have is either too easy, too difficult, or too short, I think.

Bump.

Eh, what the heck. I'll throw mine in there.

Gorgosaurus Theft

http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-onlyletters|2268478829%3Asast-500451922443

Damsel In Distress by Coneten.

Well, this is a tough one, the adventure starts promising, a fairytale theme, you really think: Wow! This could become something. Then there are many scenic parts in the vicinity.
At first I couldn't find the cave. So I saw all of the scenery you built. The waterfall beneath the rocks was nice, and I saw an entire medieval village. But when I finally found the cave, (I didn't talk to the knight again) the adventure went on quickly but didn't take me to any of these places.
The adventure was amusing, but you've taken so much time making the scenery and then you don't do anything with it. I really think it's a lost chance.
Maybe when one day you incorporate the rest of the scenery it's in but not yet.
I'm sorry it was a touch decision. I really thought about it for a long time but I really feel it can be better.

It's okay. I guess I should have realized that if I threw in all of that extra scenery it would have drawn people to it, rather than to where they were supposed to go. It was just supposed to be eye candy and give the location context . I don't think the story actually needs to use any of those places though.

What kind of things would you have done differently? Are you just disappointed that the adventure didn't incorporate everything I put in? Would you rather have fought the dragon, rather than hear about its realty issues? I'm working on my second Fractured Fairytale (and already my brain is twisting up a third) which will essentially play the same. However, this one takes place in just a city, not the wilderness, so it shouldn't feel as aimless. I appreciate hearing people come up with issues about my adventures that I would not have thought of at all while working on it so that I can improve later ones.

Also, did you get a chance to look at my other adventures? Don't be too shy and feel free to check out my others that I didn't post if you wish (though a lot of them I was still learning how the editor worked )

Well, The parts of the adventure that were there were good, The princess' boyfriend, right up to the ghettoblaster and the weights.
But The adventure kept me feeling a little... dissapointed.
Don't put in a fight with the dragon. The twist where.... well let's nor spoil it. It was good!
I'll rate your others later. I'm doing Vilageidiotx right now

Vilageidiotx: Thermopylae

Who know history lessons could be so much fun! It was really great. The descriptions, the level of difficulty and the fact that, I hope I don't spoil too much right now, you find yourself in the middle of a sea battle. Allover, well done. I liked it really much. Added!

Coneten: Trouble at Crucible Station

This one was really great. The scenery is absolutely fabulous, and I didn't get the urge to visit it because of the lava
No serously. Good adventure. The station looks great. The small referrals are good (marvin and the starwars type, I forgot his name)
Really great adventure. Added!

http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-Biohazard98%7C2268202326%3Asast-500454378370

I made a V2 of my "Infection" Mission. I fixed some grammatical mistakes, spelling mistakes, added a few goals, and added as much to the environment as the complexity meter would allow me.
If it isn't that much trouble, could you please replace my V1 mission with my V2 mission?

I got another one for you to check out, if you wish.

The Case of the Pilfering Pirates
A Captain Lance Galaxy Adventure
http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-500454926429



Meet the famous Captain Lance Galaxy, and help him bring down a Spice Piracy Cartel! The first in a series.

Significant Combat

Smawful wrote:http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-Biohazard98%7C2268202326%3Asast-500454378370

I made a V2 of my "Infection" Mission. I fixed some grammatical mistakes, spelling mistakes, added a few goals, and added as much to the environment as the complexity meter would allow me.
If it isn't that much trouble, could you please replace my V1 mission with my V2 mission?

I've replaced it. I'll check it out, but I won't review it, Liked the origional already.

LordSharpe wrote:I got another one for you to check out, if you wish.

The Case of the Pilfering Pirates
A Captain Lance Galaxy Adventure



Meet the famous Captain Lance Galaxy, and help him bring down a Spice Piracy Cartel! The first in a series.

Significant Combat

There's no link to the adventure in your post

Whoopsie, fixed.