Michal04 wrote:Can I submit my short (but I think quite detailed) adventure for review?

http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-Michal04|2262998646%3Asast-500842502333

Okay, I'll get that done after Monckat's.
Neither of which I can do until tomorrow, actually.

That is fine. thank you.

Monckat: I can't review your adventure because I can't complete it. It seems that something is broken in Act 2, and the things you have to destroy don't seem to be able to be destroyed. i also got things very out of order at that point, and there is the atmospheric glitch. I suggest some fixes and/or explanations of what to do.

CloudyVision wrote:Monckat: I can't review your adventure because I can't complete it. It seems that something is broken in Act 2, and the things you have to destroy don't seem to be able to be destroyed. i also got things very out of order at that point, and there is the atmospheric glitch. I suggest some fixes and/or explanations of what to do.

The things you have to destroy should be destroyed whenever one of the Lu symbols over the city change to the Thierian symbols. That system always seemed to work for me, and no one else seemed to have that problem. I would make sure all the Lu symbols have changed to the Thierian symbols, if they haven't then there's a Lu soldier still hiding out somewhere, unless you encountered a glitch I never caught. About the atmosphere, I didn't know what to do about that because it only seemed to happen some of the time.

Monckat wrote:

CloudyVision wrote:Monckat: I can't review your adventure because I can't complete it. It seems that something is broken in Act 2, and the things you have to destroy don't seem to be able to be destroyed. i also got things very out of order at that point, and there is the atmospheric glitch. I suggest some fixes and/or explanations of what to do.

The things you have to destroy should be destroyed whenever one of the Lu symbols over the city change to the Thierian symbols. That system always seemed to work for me, and no one else seemed to have that problem. I would make sure all the Lu symbols have changed to the Thierian symbols, if they haven't then there's a Lu soldier still hiding out somewhere, unless you encountered a glitch I never caught. About the atmosphere, I didn't know what to do about that because it only seemed to happen some of the time.

Ah, so those are triggered when all the Lu soldiers nearby are killed? In that case, my problem was that nobody was attacking them, and they killed me too quickly, so I wasn't going to fight them.

CloudyVision wrote:

Monckat wrote:

CloudyVision wrote:Monckat: I can't review your adventure because I can't complete it. It seems that something is broken in Act 2, and the things you have to destroy don't seem to be able to be destroyed. i also got things very out of order at that point, and there is the atmospheric glitch. I suggest some fixes and/or explanations of what to do.

The things you have to destroy should be destroyed whenever one of the Lu symbols over the city change to the Thierian symbols. That system always seemed to work for me, and no one else seemed to have that problem. I would make sure all the Lu symbols have changed to the Thierian symbols, if they haven't then there's a Lu soldier still hiding out somewhere, unless you encountered a glitch I never caught. About the atmosphere, I didn't know what to do about that because it only seemed to happen some of the time.

Ah, so those are triggered when all the Lu soldiers nearby are killed? In that case, my problem was that nobody was attacking them, and they killed me too quickly, so I wasn't going to fight them.

Yeah, you have to kill every Lu in the city. If by people not attacking the enemy you mean that the Lowlanders just stood still and didn't attack, that's because there's a Lowlander deserter nearby getting them to defy their masters. The deserters will emote angry and you'll have to kill them to make the other Lowlanders attack.

Monckat wrote:

CloudyVision wrote:

Monckat wrote:

CloudyVision wrote:Monckat: I can't review your adventure because I can't complete it. It seems that something is broken in Act 2, and the things you have to destroy don't seem to be able to be destroyed. i also got things very out of order at that point, and there is the atmospheric glitch. I suggest some fixes and/or explanations of what to do.

The things you have to destroy should be destroyed whenever one of the Lu symbols over the city change to the Thierian symbols. That system always seemed to work for me, and no one else seemed to have that problem. I would make sure all the Lu symbols have changed to the Thierian symbols, if they haven't then there's a Lu soldier still hiding out somewhere, unless you encountered a glitch I never caught. About the atmosphere, I didn't know what to do about that because it only seemed to happen some of the time.

Ah, so those are triggered when all the Lu soldiers nearby are killed? In that case, my problem was that nobody was attacking them, and they killed me too quickly, so I wasn't going to fight them.

Yeah, you have to kill every Lu in the city. If by people not attacking the enemy you mean that the Lowlanders just stood still and didn't attack, that's because there's a Lowlander deserter nearby getting them to defy their masters. The deserters will emote angry and you'll have to kill them to make the other Lowlanders attack.

Ah. A highly advanced system. Maybe a bit too advanced, though.

Hello, I'm new around here so if I do anything wrong please inform me.
Anyways, I've created an adventure about life as a small semi-aquatic mammal, and I would like to know where I need to improve. Also, if you could give any suggestions about my carnivorous plant creations in the level please do.
(Even if that means I need to completely change my methodology.)

Link: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-500842999068 (I also made an easier version in case that one is too hard for the average player) http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-500843020851
Preferred reviewer: cbfstudios or CloudyVision (because they have nothing on their plates)
Why you should review this adventure: It is challenging without having any shooting in it (you don't have any powerful weapons). It mostly requires stealth and patience; i originally created it as an 8Th grade report on animal behaviors and complex ecosystems. It is meant for educational purposes, as well as entertainment.

God-mod wrote:Hello, I'm new around here so if I do anything wrong please inform me.
Anyways, I've created an adventure about life as a small semi-aquatic mammal, and I would like to know where I need to improve. Also, if you could give any suggestions about my carnivorous plant creations in the level please do.
(Even if that means I need to completely change my methodology.)

Link: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-500842999068 (I also made an easier version in case that one is too hard for the average player) http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-500843020851
Preferred reviewer: cbfstudios or CloudyVision (because they have nothing on their plates)
Why you should review this adventure: It is challenging without having any shooting in it (you don't have any powerful weapons). It mostly requires stealth and patience; i originally created it as an 8Th grade report on animal behaviors and complex ecosystems. It is meant for educational purposes, as well as entertainment.

I'll get that... since I'm the only one reviewing.
And by the way, the OP is outdated, and I do have stuff on my plate, but I'm handling everything right now.

@Monckat: I think I found out what my problem is, and it is a gameplay problem. The tiny AI creatures that destroy the symbols keep getting killed by Thierian lowlanders, who attack them. They die, since they don't have infinite health. And then the act is uncompletable.
I will fix this and keep playing, but I can't give an honest review until this is fixed.
EDIT: Even at that, it doesn't work. The creatures just fail to destroy the symbols. I simply can't review this adventure.

CloudyVision wrote:@Monckat: I think I found out what my problem is, and it is a gameplay problem. The tiny AI creatures that destroy the symbols keep getting killed by Thierian lowlanders, who attack them. They die, since they don't have infinite health. And then the act is uncompletable.
I will fix this and keep playing, but I can't give an honest review until this is fixed.
EDIT: Even at that, it doesn't work. The creatures just fail to destroy the symbols. I simply can't review this adventure.

Oh, sorry. I don't think that ever happened to me, so I'm afraid I don't know how to help you. Many thanks for spending so much time and effort trying to review it!

Monckat wrote:

CloudyVision wrote:@Monckat: I think I found out what my problem is, and it is a gameplay problem. The tiny AI creatures that destroy the symbols keep getting killed by Thierian lowlanders, who attack them. They die, since they don't have infinite health. And then the act is uncompletable.
I will fix this and keep playing, but I can't give an honest review until this is fixed.
EDIT: Even at that, it doesn't work. The creatures just fail to destroy the symbols. I simply can't review this adventure.

Oh, sorry. I don't think that ever happened to me, so I'm afraid I don't know how to help you. Many thanks for spending so much time and effort trying to review it!

You're welcome.
I'd rather I could actually review it, and I just might not give up yet, since there are people who have completed 100% on the leaderboard.

When I get the chance I'll go mess around with the AI and see if I can find a fix.

http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-AlexLive_1997%7C500692886662%3Asast-500834480896
I would want you to review this. I and a friend have made this collabratively.
It's a non-direct sequel to 'Black Tears'.

I would want CloudyVision to review this, as he has reviewed both Evacuation and Black Tears.

Why you would review this? Because we have put a lot of effort into the evironment, game play and characters. Not to say the story. It might be complicated but I have an information thread about the universe it takes place in.
Here--->http://forum.spore.com/jforum/posts/list/77169.page

Take your time.

Looks like I'd better get some reviews done. Michal01 is up first.