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I'd like some criticism! What do you think I could improve on? Please post in detail more below.
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Krammekat wrote:
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Edit 3: Picture teaser below.

*snip*

I'm loving this so far, image looks awesome! Excited for episode 2


Thanks! I've done most of the writing for Episode 2A. It should be finished around tomorrow evening. This episode will be the full eight acts.

glm345 wrote:I was wondering. Why is this 18+? It's can't be sporn cause that would get you banned.
Does it have strong language or something?


I don't think it will contain Sporn, but it does include a variety of themes that I will be adding into later episodes. It will certainly earn that title. I have done sporn in the past and got permission from that. *ahem* There's going to be a lot of strong language.

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Episode 2A is now out. This episode will resemble a certain video game you may have played, L.A Noire. It is real fun writing this one. I've added an easter egg to hint the game and this episode.

Episode 2A: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-501054988446

The video is now uploading, I will update this post when it's finished.

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Sharples65 wrote:Episode 2A is now out. This episode will resemble a certain video game you may have played, L.A Noire. It is real fun writing this one. I've added an easter egg to hint the game and this episode.

Episode 2A: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-501054988446

The video is now uploading, I will update this post when it's finished.

I'll be watching out for the video, I've been keeping up with this series solely on YT
Also, haven't played L.A. Noire so I'll definitely miss the easter egg

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Krammekat wrote:
Sharples65 wrote:Episode 2A is now out. This episode will resemble a certain video game you may have played, L.A Noire. It is real fun writing this one. I've added an easter egg to hint the game and this episode.

Episode 2A: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-501054988446

The video is now uploading, I will update this post when it's finished.

I'll be watching out for the video, I've been keeping up with this series solely on YT
Also, haven't played L.A. Noire so I'll definitely miss the easter egg


The video is now out. It took quite a while to upload (it's 27 minutes long).

Here it is:


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Sharples65 wrote: *snip*

The video is now out. It took quite a while to upload (it's 27 minutes long).

Here it is:


This episode was awesome! I got really immersed in the investigation and the music was great
As for choices, I vote for option 1: Feathers good cop Frost bad cop. Ambassador did say not to be a therapist, but we dunno how Maral is gonna handle the interrogation, so it's best to have both sides covered - Feathers doesn't have to get all sentimental, buuut her past experience makes the choice easier
Excited for the next episode!

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Sharples65 wrote: *snip*

The video is now out. It took quite a while to upload (it's 27 minutes long).

Here it is:


This episode was awesome! I got really immersed in the investigation and the music was great
As for choices, I vote for option 1: Feathers good cop Frost bad cop. Ambassador did say not to be a therapist, but we dunno how Maral is gonna handle the interrogation, so it's best to have both sides covered - Feathers doesn't have to get all sentimental, buuut her past experience makes the choice easier
Excited for the next episode!


Thanks for the compliments and for voting! We have three agreeing on the same choice and the 24 hour limit is nearing to an end so I'll just confirm it now.

There will be five questions for Maral Wellsmith. These segments will be pretty short. But you will have a lot of choices on each one. Most of them will be evidence you've collected however.

Edit: The episode should be out pretty soon.

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Episode 2B is out, you can find it here: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-501055035184

The video is currently uploading. I've had to disable Adventurelook -norainbows (default for this series) because it makes looking at the person you're questioning extremely difficult. If you wish, you can re-enable it in the adventure. There will be a series of questions, good luck trying to find the right answer.

If the adventure is glitchy or anything let me know, in the video Feathers happens to stretch out near the end, pretty funny.

Edit: Video is here.

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Sharples65 wrote:Episode 2B is out, you can find it here: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-501055035184

The video is currently uploading. I've had to disable Adventurelook -norainbows (default for this series) because it makes looking at the person you're questioning extremely difficult. If you wish, you can re-enable it in the adventure. There will be a series of questions, good luck trying to find the right answer.

If the adventure is glitchy or anything let me know, in the video Feathers happens to stretch out near the end, pretty funny.

Edit: Video is here.



This is so impressive! 2B feels like an expansion, with the inclusion of evidence - also, with multiple choices of evidence, it's even harder to ascertain what is relevant, and what isn't.
I know I may be showering you with compliments, but this is the kinda thing that keeps Spore interesting, and explores the games potential!
As for the choice, I'm gonna go through some of the previous videos and gain some more confidence in what I'm gonna answer - it's tricky! (as it should be)
I'll return and edit this when I have my vote ready.

*EDIT* I will vote option 3 E: Ambassador's statement for episode 2B

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Krammekat wrote:
Sharples65 wrote:Episode 2B is out, you can find it here: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-501055035184

The video is currently uploading. I've had to disable Adventurelook -norainbows (default for this series) because it makes looking at the person you're questioning extremely difficult. If you wish, you can re-enable it in the adventure. There will be a series of questions, good luck trying to find the right answer.

If the adventure is glitchy or anything let me know, in the video Feathers happens to stretch out near the end, pretty funny.

Edit: Video is here.



This is so impressive! 2B feels like an expansion, with the inclusion of evidence - also, with multiple choices of evidence, it's even harder to ascertain what is relevant, and what isn't.
I know I may be showering you with compliments, but this is the kinda thing that keeps Spore interesting, and explores the games potential!
As for the choice, I'm gonna go through some of the previous videos and gain some more confidence in what I'm gonna answer - it's tricky! (as it should be)
I'll return and edit this when I have my vote ready.

*EDIT* I will vote option 3 E: Ambassador's statement for episode 2B


Thanks for the compliments! Most of episode 2 was inspired by L.A Noire's investigation work. I took my format from that so credit goes to that game.

Also, thank you for voting! We'll see how this goes in Episode 2C.

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Episode 2C is out: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-501055069414

Video:

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Sharples65 wrote:Episode 2C is out: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-501055069414

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SPORE! Wrong choice from the get-go
At least I (think) I know the answer to the next one
My vote for episode 2C will be 9 [E] EFC Statement. They mentioned the VPN's which was all very suspiciouso

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Krammekat wrote:
Sharples65 wrote:Episode 2C is out: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-501055069414

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SPORE! Wrong choice from the get-go
At least I (think) I know the answer to the next one
My vote for episode 2C will be 9 [E] EFC Statement. They mentioned the VPN's which was all very suspiciouso


Thank you for voting! Interrogations are a really fun part of these segments to make, it's nice to have people get involved in this. If Feathers accuses a person of lying without the correct evidence, she will just fabricate things that she believes could be true.

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Sharples65 wrote:
Krammekat wrote:
Sharples65 wrote:Episode 2C is out: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-501055069414

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SPORE! Wrong choice from the get-go
At least I (think) I know the answer to the next one
My vote for episode 2C will be 9 [E] EFC Statement. They mentioned the VPN's which was all very suspiciouso


Thank you for voting! Interrogations are a really fun part of these segments to make, it's nice to have people get involved in this. If Feathers accuses a person of lying without the correct evidence, she will just fabricate things that she believes could be true.


It's definitely fun participating in as well! I can't help but think, Life is Strange or Telltale games like The Wolf Among Us. It's awesome
Also.
You go Feathers. You go.

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Episode 2D is now out: http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-501055110235

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