SeanStar25 wrote:You had a perfectly fine thread to ask this on:
http://forum.spore.com/jforum/posts/list/43956.page

actually that one is a duplicate of the original one he made

wow this is going to be a fun thing to make!!

what exactly is the adventure about?

a fire dragon that has to save his friends,family,and the world from a evil frce thats about to take over the world!but its going to have a twist in it!!!

... That's an awful idea.
Here comes the one star, woo hoo.

im open for ideas so if u have one go right ahead!!!!

Think about the mission as a whole.
Does it seem well thought through?
No?
Guess what?
You need to start putting a lot more thought in to things.

i hope u know that i put alot of thought into things!most of the time my adventures revolve around the captain or lead story member and i change things to make it more difficult and fun!so my adventure may or may not go as i say or said!

That doesn't make things well thought through.
That just shows you know how to make a basic mission.
Play this:
http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-500448600750
Note, I don't have any other missions on hand, mine will make a fine example.
That mission took weeks to think through.
I had to work out many kinks, just to make it work.
I had to develope character styles, personnalities, and secrets.
You need to do that plus over time.

If you don't want me to give you crap about how bad your adventure is, don't make adventures.

a basic mission!and dont make adventures!what hell(sorry about my language)is wrong with u!i will make what ever i want if u dont like it then dont play it or tell me its horrible!so if u dont have anything nice to say then keep that crappy mouth of urs quiet!

CresentDragon95 wrote:a basic mission!and dont make adventures!what hell(sorry about my language)is wrong with u!i will make what ever i want if u dont like it then dont play it or tell me its horrible!so if u dont have anything nice to say then keep that crappy mouth of urs quiet!

Please, re-atend pre-school and get an education in spelling and grammar before atempting to threaten/impress others over the internet.
Your creations are awful, your missions are retar*ded, your grasp over the English language is flawed.
It takes hard work to be good at anything, much less some thing as difficult as Spore, instead of SPORE at me about how I'm " a mean i am teh bestest creator in spore and you are suck", you take what I'm saying in to consideration to help your self get better?

I DONT FREAKIN CARE!WILL U JUST SHUT UR MOUTH AND BE NICE!AND SUCKY CREATIONS!U PROBLEY DIDNT LOOK!AND I TOLD U!IF U DIDNT HAVE ANYTHING NICE TO SAY THEN KEEP UR MOUTH SHUT!

You have no authority over me.
Capslock solves nothing.
If you want ever want to get better or avoid confrontations like this, you should listen to what other people say.
That's called crit, you use it to improve.
It may not seem nice, but tough SPORE, you need to listen to it, instead of just shouting at people.

What are you doing up this late, anyway, young man?

i wasnt trying to boss u around at all!and know what u should listen to people aswell!and i hope u know that ur being quit a jerk!and im a freakin girl!and i dont care if its late!and i did listen to what u said thats why i said i was open for ideas!u could of given ur idea and walked away or said nothing at all!

First off, being angry and shouting is bad.
It makes you look stupid, abnoxious, and daft.
You will find that most people are jerks on the internet, especialy when you start to make a fool of yourself the way you have been doing.
Work on your spelling and grammar, young lady, it's very importent to universal human life.
I could have walked away, but I'd rather stay here and curb your bad habits, to help you become a respectable member of society.