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Ricotez


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Get yourself ready for - Issue 002



As you may see, I have improved the speech bubbles and fonts. Also, I hope this time everyone gets the joke.


Sharpesh0t wrote:Im sure you've heard this before, but if you've got nothing constructive to say, then dont say anything at all.

Have you met the inhabitants of planet Gaffe already?
The Better Being - A Spore Comic Newest Issue: 005
My threads: Space Infrastructure; Six Stages, Twelve Phases; Pacifists and Warlords; If Spore were a book... (Cover Art)
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Ricotez wrote:Get yourself ready for - Issue 002



As you may see, I have improved the speech bubbles and fonts. Also, I hope this time everyone gets the joke.


That was good, but it would be interesting to have more than just one picture per issue, so its more like a comic book.



Ccurving wrote:
The CC was ten bucks. Extra crap FOR the CC is $20.
The game was $50. Extra crap FOR the game will be...$100?
Ricotez


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Certainly, but I first want to get the 'style' right. I may experiment with multi-panel comics in Issue 003...


Sharpesh0t wrote:Im sure you've heard this before, but if you've got nothing constructive to say, then dont say anything at all.

Have you met the inhabitants of planet Gaffe already?
The Better Being - A Spore Comic Newest Issue: 005
My threads: Space Infrastructure; Six Stages, Twelve Phases; Pacifists and Warlords; If Spore were a book... (Cover Art)
DagenAdriel


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another thing you could do is to make a website for it!

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draknfyr


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I like your comic idea a lot, but the humor could use a bit of improvement (obviously subjective criticism here). Im thinking along the lines of GUComics. By all means, dont stop making them. You just have to find the subtle humor that anyone who has, played the game, heard the hype or read the forums, can relate to.

Edit: Botched the link... Fixed.

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Ricotez


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Sorry for the delay, but I had a lot of stuff to do this week. Anyways, here's issue 003:



Actually, I tried to make a screen of my cell with just one big predator. However, as I was randomly pusing [C], I made several more screenshots, including this one. I thought the three big, black cells fighting over my smaller, blue one made the perfect evil idiots.


Sharpesh0t wrote:Im sure you've heard this before, but if you've got nothing constructive to say, then dont say anything at all.

Have you met the inhabitants of planet Gaffe already?
The Better Being - A Spore Comic Newest Issue: 005
My threads: Space Infrastructure; Six Stages, Twelve Phases; Pacifists and Warlords; If Spore were a book... (Cover Art)
Ricotez


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Bump.

I hate those stickies on the first page, they make recently bumped threads dissapear so quickly...


Sharpesh0t wrote:Im sure you've heard this before, but if you've got nothing constructive to say, then dont say anything at all.

Have you met the inhabitants of planet Gaffe already?
The Better Being - A Spore Comic Newest Issue: 005
My threads: Space Infrastructure; Six Stages, Twelve Phases; Pacifists and Warlords; If Spore were a book... (Cover Art)
losklan


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Eh dont listen to them I think its pretty cool just that you need a little more lines so we can actualy be In the story

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There is no story. They are just single cartoons. I first want to master cartooncrafting before I dare endeavour such a challenge as storymaking.


Sharpesh0t wrote:Im sure you've heard this before, but if you've got nothing constructive to say, then dont say anything at all.

Have you met the inhabitants of planet Gaffe already?
The Better Being - A Spore Comic Newest Issue: 005
My threads: Space Infrastructure; Six Stages, Twelve Phases; Pacifists and Warlords; If Spore were a book... (Cover Art)
deity


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I hate those stickies as much as you do. The jokes are good, but I think we can only have a real laugh when there is at least a micro-story.



Ccurving wrote:
The CC was ten bucks. Extra crap FOR the CC is $20.
The game was $50. Extra crap FOR the game will be...$100?
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Jackuul wrote:Children are indeed scary.

They're retarded enough to stick a fork in a toaster and burn down a house, they're smart enough to take off the panel of the heater box - and retarded enough to blow out the pilot light. They carry diseases, germs, and all kinds of nasty mites and worms on them. They spread disease and viruses by never washing their hands, and touching things with mucus from their noses upon their fingers.

The very visage of a child who is sneezing and has a reddish forehead being lugged around by an idiotic mother makes me cringe with all the festering illnesses they are spreading. The fact the insurance did not cover arson - no matter who caused it - will leave at least six families homeless this year.

The prospect that these festering retarded sacks of meat will grow up into idiot teenagers who will drive recklessly, still blow out pilot lights, and still never wash their hands brings more horror to me than anything else in the world.

I loathed children as a child, and I loathe them now. I identified them as the source of my illnesses, and the cause of many problems when I was but seven years old, and since then I have wanted to outlaw them in stores, and schools, if they are sick. If you send a sick child to school you are a terrorist.

I say bah! Bah to children!


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i got it, but i have one... kid that is...

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Catnine


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Bwuha, nice to see you went through with your comic plan :P I'm liking it so far, keep up the good work (and lulz)!

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Bahahaha.

O loled every time i read them.

I got them all.

Lulz. GJ

I like the fonts you used for the three against one comic.


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okay.................


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