please review "Fate of Warlothin" it doesn't have many plays and it is only yellow face so I could really use some feedback right now.
here is the link to "Fate of Warlothin"
http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=ftr-adventure%3Ausr-itsglenn%7C2264975194%3Asast-500371815648

Finally after a long six days of work, "Journey of a Forgotten Hero-2" is finally completed! Yay! You have played the first part and this one is (in my opinion) much better. It completely maxed out the adventure complexity. Not a single part more could go on. Anyway, remember that even though this is a story, a creature could tell you something and not elaborate, this is a series... Those things that are not elaborated on will be explained in future volumes

Here is the link, and I hope you enjoy it

Journey of a Forgotten Hero-2

Hey there Zefier.

I played your rach adventures and was very pleased. Looking forward to experience some mor of your work.

As i like your style, i'd also like you to review the "Epigramma"-Series i started recently.

Some kind of proofreading would be especially pleasant, 'cause english isn't my native tongue and though somewhat able to communicate, i tend to be my worst critic.

Greetings,
Ryu Kazuha

I would love if you would review my adventure! :D

I played Orbit by willythewhale and LOVED IT! So I went and experimented with my own orbital planet, and then i thought "what if i chain the jump pads together and made a kind of roller coaster?" So thats exactly what i did :D! I decided to put some of my best work in as a sort of Orbital gallery and to make it more interesting!

I have spent countless hours over the course of 4 DAYS testing, tweeking, experimenting, and fighting with the camera controls to make this absolutely perfect! so please give me some feed back and tell me what i can improve!

For now i limited the use of captains because different wings seem to have different orbits o_o In the future i plan to add different acts that will change the scenery by passing through rings or something. I hope that other people will use this idea as a great way to show off your hard work to people in a fun way! XD

Stryfe's Orbital Museum


The picture is the link! :P

Thank you, and I hope you have fun!

Ok, I edited all 3 adventures using Raptor's feedback... So someone play them now and tell me if they are improved?? ^_^

Hey there Raptor!

Don't scream -- I wanted to catch you before you got to review mine. Based on feedback (people really don't like to have ally objectives in quests, it seems), I've been able to work with the NPCs and get them to do what I want without forced ally objectives.

So yet AGAIN! Unless someone comes up with a huge bug... I have an updated Quest URL. (So sorry!)

Wayrift's Dragon Tales, Part 1 -- Zoe



Description: I am Seer Dunstan of the Dragon Haven of the Nefolian world. I am seeking a Captain who can go above and beyond the call of duty... to inspire and help our young heir to take her place as the Wingleader of our Clan. If you might be such a person, please step forward!

And fear not the Dragons. We mean you no harm.

REVISED - No longer do you need to finish Ally objectives to complete this version. Also, a new teleporter has been placed, based on feedback, in order to shorten walking distance.


http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-500388760022

I edited the Swarm again. Please use this link to the adventure instead of the other one. http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=sast-500389149865

Edited "journey of a forgotten hero" please use this link instead thanks!

http://www.spore.com/sporepedia#qry=usr-Schnitz1012|2270401150%3Asast-500388562864

I think Raptor has quite a load here...

It seems we buried him totally. I hope he's still alive and well.

Greetings
Ryu Kazuha

He's just off having some good times in reality.

lol raptor is more than booked, we could use new reviewers lol

Reality? What's this? A new game? Never heard of it. xD

Greetings
Ryu Kazuha

HAHAH nice one, guess i took over from raptor, , maybe me and raptor should work together and review both on one thread so we could cut the work load

Actually - that's a Good idea... perhaps we should get you two together on One thread and you just each do reviews.